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Sorry guys, I changed the poem to a picture format and added that nasty watermark. I'm sick of people stealing it. I really don't know why you guys like this poem. It's really crappy and horribly written.

I don't care if you can't read it anymore, but I hope you still enjoy. c:
(To people who are thinking of stealing this poem. I DO check Google and other search engines to see if my work has been stole and I WILL report you if you have stolen this or any of my other work. Please don't steal other people's work. Make your own. It's not that hard to come up with something like this.)

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I AM NOT DEPRESSED I just started singing this. It's supposed to be like a nursery rhyme/song. :3 It's supposed to sound happy and up beat. ⌐⌐ How Ironic ...
XD Also I have hand movements to this.

~4/21/08~
Wow this is more popular than I thought it would be. Thank you all! :heart:

~4/25/08~
People keep stealing this and it's getting annoying.

~5/4/08~
100 faves?! Holy crap! Thank you all so much! :heart:

~5/5/09~
Thanks for the 200+ faves! :heart::heart:

~7/22/10~
Sorry people, I changed the poem to a picture format, because I'm sick of people taking it. Hope you guys still enjoy.

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The Emo Song © Me =DannyP514

DO NOT STEAL MY WORK! IF I FIND THAT YOU HAVE TAKEN ANY OF MY CREATIONS, I WILL REPORT YOU!
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XxEmeraldMayxX Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I sent an angel to watch over you last night but it came back. I asked "why?" The angel said, "Angels don't watch over angels." Twenty-one angels are IN your world. Ten of them are sleeping, ten are playing, one is reading this message. Send this to ten friends including me. I guess if I don't get it back I'm not one of them. As soon as you get five replies, someone you love will quietly surprise you. Please read, not joking. God has seen you struggling with something. God says it's over. A blessing is coming your way. If you believe in God send this message on. Please don't ignore it. You are being tested. God is going to fix two things BIG tonight in your favor. DROP everything and pass it on. Tomorrow will be the best day of your life. Don't break this chain. Send to 14 friends in 10 minutes. It's not that hard.
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m4xm0u53 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Uh, I don't see how that will stop people from taking it. I managed to retype it in 60 seconds. 
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DannyP514 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Student General Artist
I did that back when I actually cared if people took it. I was 18 at the time and just mad that people kept taking it. I thought it would make it a little harder for people to take it.
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Rentheadangel Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
would you mind if I used this in a song if I credit you because if you aren't okay with that I'm totally fine with it I just think this poem is awesome and It inspired me to write a song :)
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izzyizz303 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I JUST LOVE IT WHEN A REALLY SAD AND DEPRESSING SONG HAS AN UPBEAT TUNE TO IT. LIKE DEAD! FROM MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE. AND I SWEAR I'M NOT YELLING I THINK I BROKE MY COMPUTER BECAUSE I TURNED ON CAPS LOCK AND NOW I CAN'T TURN IT OFF. SOMEONE HELP, EVERYONE THINKS I'M YELLING AT THEM.
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lovelyangel846 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I don't steal I fave
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DannyP514 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Student General Artist
This is the best comment I've ever gotten on this poem. :heart:
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lovelyangel846 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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poetrybound Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
this waterwork or poem you have here is really talented i made not be emo but i feel for those like them go to extremes be them se3lves
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DannyP514 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Student General Artist
The watermark is actually just my attempt to keep people from taking my poem, but it doesn't keep people from stealing it. Thank you.
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murtaghmorzansson Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Do people make fun of you because you're emo? i think emo is awesome though im not and i wish i were. i love their hairstyles all spiked and all. 1 more point towards emo...1 down for normal (no offence to most of those who are), but emo is really cool minus cutting, but i know some don't which to me i think is great...[link]
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murtaghmorzansson Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student General Artist
i mean no offence if you're not
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manic832 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
opps thats part of the son
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DannyP514 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Student General Artist
What song?
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manic832 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
the emo song
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DannyP514 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Not mine, if that's what you're talking about.
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manic832 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
Dear Diary:

Mood: Apathetic.

My life is spiraling downward.
I couldn't get enough money to go to the
Blood Red Romance and Suffocate me dry concert.
It sucks 'cause they play some of my favorite songs
like "Stab My Heart Because I Love You" and
"Rip Apart My Soul" and of course,
"Stabby Rip Stab Stab".
And it doesn't help that I couldn't
get my hair to do that flippy thing either.
Like that guy from that band can do.
Some days ugh...

I'm an emo kid, non-conforming as can be
You'd be non-conforming too if
you looked just like me
I have paint on my nails and make-up on my face
I'm almost emo enough to start shaving my legs
'Cause I feel real deep when I'm dressing in drag
I call it freedom of expression,
most just call me a fag
'Cause our dudes look like chicks,
and our chicks look like dykes
'Cause emo is one step below transvestite!

Stop my breathing and slit my throat
I must be emo
I don't jump around when I go to shows
I must be emo

I'm dark, and sensitive with low self-esteem
The way I dress makes every day feel like Halloween
I have no real problems but I like to make believe
I stole my sister's mascara now
I'm grounded for a week.
Sulking and writing poetry are my hobbies
I can't get through a Hawthorne
Heights album without sobbing
Girls keep breaking up with me,
it's never any fun.

They say they already have a pussy,
they don't need another one

Stop my breathing and slit my throat
I must be emo
I don't jump around when I go to shows
I must be emo
Dye in my hair and polish on my toes
I must be emo
I play guitar and write suicide notes
I must be emo

My life is just a black abyss,
you know, it's so dark.
And it's suffocating me.
Grabbing hold of me and tightening it's grip,
tighter than a pair of
my little sister's jeans...
which look great on me by the way.

When I get depressed I cut my
wrists in every direction
Hearing songs about getting
dumped give me an erection
I write in a live journal and
wear thick rimmed glasses
I tell my friends I bleed black
and cry during classes
I'm just a bad, cheap, imitation of goth,
You can read me "Catcher in the
Rye", and watch me jack off.
I wear skin tight clothes while hating my life
If I said I like girls, I'd only be half right!

I look like I'm dead and dress like a homo
I must be emo
Screw XBox, I play old school Nintendo
I must be emo
I like to whine and hit my parentals
I must be emo
Me and my friends all look like clones
I must be emo

My parents just don't get me, you know.
They think I'm gay just because
they saw me kiss a guy.
Well, a couple guys. But I mean, it's the 2000's.
Can't 2 ... or 4 dudes make-out with
each other without being gay?
I mean, chicks dig that kind of thing anyways.
I don't know diary,
sometimes I think you're the only one that gets me,
you're my best friend...
I feel like tacos...
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fearfighter2 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
do you sing it while you cut??
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DannyP514 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Student General Artist
No. I never did. I don't cut. I came up with it randomly one day at school.
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moona177 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011
i singing it with the rythm of orphan tears by your favorite martian :3
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Purplemo Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011
hehe i love this
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silverHyacinth Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I relly love this.
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i like singing this with a happy tune. its catchy
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GUPRIELA Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Student General Artist
this is very good!
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RavenaCrowe Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Am I the only one who enjoys singing this in a happy tone? Haha I sound insane when I do :) Love this
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DannyP514 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Student General Artist
Actually, it's supposed to he sung with a happy tune. When I first sang it, I was jumping around and doing hand movements to it with a smile. I'm sure a lot of people thought I was insane.
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RavenaCrowe Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Ohh lol that sounds fun :D
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Emochick86 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2011  Student Digital Artist
This is cool i can rap it. and according to the name you kinda know why i like it haha ^.^
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TheImageKeeper Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2011  Student General Artist
you might find it to be crappy and horrible written but it's not and if you look at most poems that are"sophisticated" ones that are done for weeks on end just to get one line they're the ones with no emotion. it's an awsome poem and hits right at home so after that being all said can i use it???
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DannyP514 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011  Student General Artist
As long as you give me credit for writing it, you may use it.
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TheImageKeeper Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011  Student General Artist
thanks so much yea i totally will and besides i know what it's like to not be given credit so of course i'll give all the credit to you thanks again
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DannyP514 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks. Let me know what you use the poem for.
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TheImageKeeper Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Student General Artist
well i'm doing this piece in my sketchbook for my friend and i saw the poem so yea i wanted to include it
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DannyP514 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011  Student General Artist
Sounds awesome
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Emochick86 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I like it
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AlvinSevilleIsMINE Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
and what is your view on emos?
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DannyP514 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2011  Student General Artist
I have no view on them these days because there are so many "definitions" that can be said for "emos".
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AlvinSevilleIsMINE Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah. i dont know why so many people dislike them though.
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DannyP514 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2011  Student General Artist
They've been given a bad wrap by a lot of people.
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AlvinSevilleIsMINE Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah. Some people are just very cruel
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therobotickatlover Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2011
omg i love this with a passion :love:
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nun09 Featured By Owner May 12, 2011
thanks once again for lettin me use it :)
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DannyP514 Featured By Owner May 14, 2011  Student General Artist
Anytime. :3
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bruised--vein Featured By Owner May 2, 2011
So only "emos" kill themselves?
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DannyP514 Featured By Owner May 3, 2011  Student General Artist
If that's what you want to think.
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bruised--vein Featured By Owner May 3, 2011
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nun09 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011
hey its relly nice i love it
cn i use it plssssssssss :please:
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DannyP514 Featured By Owner May 1, 2011  Student General Artist
What do you want to use it for?
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nun09 Featured By Owner May 5, 2011
its really beautiful and matches with me...and i wanna share it with sum of my frends..and keep it as a reminder of myself....... :)
cn i plssss use it?
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DannyP514 Featured By Owner May 5, 2011  Student General Artist
As long as you let people know that I wrote it.
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