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Sorry guys, I changed the poem to a picture format and added that nasty watermark. I'm sick of people stealing it. I really don't know why you guys like this poem. It's really crappy and horribly written.
I don't care if you can't read it anymore, but I hope you still enjoy. c:
I don't care if you can't read it anymore, but I hope you still enjoy. c:
Literature
Anorexia
If I died for you would you cry for me
Because lately I've been feeling so empty
Is a life like this really what it seems
Trying so hard to make our souls new and clean
Will we regret this at the end of a hard day
Will life be nothing more than longing to waste away
Does it help us, does it make us?
Does it build us, does it break us?
Take the wheels, feel the control
Work for that body, purify that soul
Challenge yourself, feel the temptation
Lavish in sin, lust the sensation
Skip it, don't take it, you know to say no
Don't be like the weak ones and let yourself go
Always stay strong and always think thin
Because this is you'r
Literature
Black As Silence
One by one the clock ticks forward
forward, later into the night.
One by one the friends leave
leave, to join their lives.
One by one you say your peace
peace, until the sun's rise.
But not for me, as I say so long
with each person passing there
is a difference in the song.
Like a well orchestrated piece of music
Beautiful in it's beginning, then
fading until it reaches the end
for me there's only silence where
love once was, was at the end.
I knew how loud silence could be
I've heard it well before.
But I never knew how black
black could be, when stared upon by silence.
Literature
Claustrophobic
My hands are unable to remain silent for long. Through tortured blinks, their control slackens, and they start to screech against the surrounding walls. My brain follows their example – crying aloud for help, shouting at my body to stop running away.
My legs are twisting and turning, my eyes melting until all I can see is blackness; all I can feel are the sickening revulsions and unshakeable impulses that my body is enduring. The air gets tighter with every second that passes, compacting as the walls close in upon me like some sick gang with no motive but to quench their throats with my fear. Always, my legs and arms flail; jumping i
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(To people who are thinking of stealing this poem. I DO check Google and other search engines to see if my work has been stole and I WILL report you if you have stolen this or any of my other work. Please don't steal other people's work. Make your own. It's not that hard to come up with something like this.)
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I AM NOT DEPRESSED I just started singing this. It's supposed to be like a nursery rhyme/song. :3 It's supposed to sound happy and up beat. ⌐⌐ How Ironic ...
XD Also I have hand movements to this.
~4/21/08~
Wow this is more popular than I thought it would be. Thank you all!
~4/25/08~
People keep stealing this and it's getting annoying.
~5/4/08~
100 faves?! Holy crap! Thank you all so much!
~5/5/09~
Thanks for the 200+ faves!
~7/22/10~
Sorry people, I changed the poem to a picture format, because I'm sick of people taking it. Hope you guys still enjoy.
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The Emo Song © Me =DannyP514
DO NOT STEAL MY WORK! IF I FIND THAT YOU HAVE TAKEN ANY OF MY CREATIONS, I WILL REPORT YOU!
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I AM NOT DEPRESSED I just started singing this. It's supposed to be like a nursery rhyme/song. :3 It's supposed to sound happy and up beat. ⌐⌐ How Ironic ...
XD Also I have hand movements to this.
~4/21/08~
Wow this is more popular than I thought it would be. Thank you all!
~4/25/08~
People keep stealing this and it's getting annoying.
~5/4/08~
100 faves?! Holy crap! Thank you all so much!
~5/5/09~
Thanks for the 200+ faves!
~7/22/10~
Sorry people, I changed the poem to a picture format, because I'm sick of people taking it. Hope you guys still enjoy.
--
The Emo Song © Me =DannyP514
DO NOT STEAL MY WORK! IF I FIND THAT YOU HAVE TAKEN ANY OF MY CREATIONS, I WILL REPORT YOU!
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I sent an angel to watch over you last night but it came back. I asked "why?" The angel said, "Angels don't watch over angels." Twenty-one angels are IN your world. Ten of them are sleeping, ten are playing, one is reading this message. Send this to ten friends including me. I guess if I don't get it back I'm not one of them. As soon as you get five replies, someone you love will quietly surprise you. Please read, not joking. God has seen you struggling with something. God says it's over. A blessing is coming your way. If you believe in God send this message on. Please don't ignore it. You are being tested. God is going to fix two things BIG tonight in your favor. DROP everything and pass it on. Tomorrow will be the best day of your life. Don't break this chain. Send to 14 friends in 10 minutes. It's not that hard.
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